The story is interesting and has potential, but the writing is awful and continually jumps around. Instantly you fall in step with the main character, Raine, because she has character of heart under extreme pressure. I downloaded the app Readict. I dont really want to give away too many spoilers though this was a very short and quick read.
The grammatical errors, huge plot issues, and the lack of detail and flow very quickly dropped the rating of this story. The character of Rose is of a shallow mean girl, but we don't get to see her that often and she doesn't come off as malicious as she should be. This could easily be the next 4 book best selling series like Twilight. After 3 days I had to find the full book on line. I did not appreciate the complete ignorance of grammar, words thrown into a semblance of a sentence, does not make a story. Not Rejected Just Unwanted by Hayboo2017. Raine thought so too, but there's just one problem...
Hayboo2017, Haylee Logue. Very High School, but understanding. The beginning was engaging but the rest just seemed really rushed. To start, I basically found this story by accident. Note: these are all the books on Goodreads for this author. Not rejected just unwanted book haylee logue. Ads between every chapter. I went to the reviews here on Goodreads to see if reading them would help me make a decision as to whether or not I wanted to download the app. Luckily for me I stumbled upon Alethia's review. A silly ad on Facebook with the first couple chapters, no title, no author, and I was hooked enough to spend a half hour searching everything I could think of to find the rest of the story. I feel this author has a bright future ahead of them in this genre of writing and just needs someone to help guide their way a bit to flesh out their short story idea and help them flesh it out to turn it into a multi book series. This is story could use being expanded by a lot, I don't know if there is an overall cannon to the werewolf universe that everyone knows but doesn't talk about but knowing would be more helpful to those new to the genre. I'm in a book club where we purposefully read bad books because we love being in pain, and I gotta tell you, this is not the worst thing out there.
Yes, there were some mistakes and editing goofs, but the story was interesting enough, that I found myself wishing the author had written a longer version of the book. Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book! Her only reason was that Rain looked weak, that's not much to go on, there's got to be more to it. Discover new books on Goodreads. He sounds like the perfect mate, right? Nice story and interesting wolf human genre. He doesn't want her. I found my own rabbit hole in this book. I am so DISAPPOINTED.... The text to voice only worked every other chapter and would not even show up in some. Not rejected just unwanted by haylee logue. But the romance was halfway decent, the conflict was clear-cut and followed through, and there were times I really genuinely enjoyed the story. The story itself pulls you in, the characters. Such a shame as the premise was solid - reading apps such as Dreame are shameful in teaching people how to write and provide meaningful content.
Having no knowledge of the author or publishing information I have to assume that this is an badly written and badly edited piece that deserves the "meh" rating. I stayed up until 3 am to complete (I found the book just when I was going to bed at 1 am when playing the game). The author's iteration could use some work too, didn't flow smoothly. I looked over the typos and some timeline issues but this book definitely needs some work on editing. Not rejected just unwanted haylee logue book. Media Type: Digital. Too many ads and interruptions it spoiled the experience. Invite Hayboo2017 to Goodreads. I may have even skipped a chapter. This was literally something I had started reading on facebook and I was so intrigued I had to find the rest of the story. Also the ad breaks kept messing up where I was.
I wanted to hear more and Allier the character development to grow. If that is the case please comment below and I will up my star rating. The snippet on Facebook was well done, it was enough that I searched it out to read more. The main character's name is Raine who is somewhat of a nobody.
Here is the link if you're interested - Normally I would have given this book 3 stars; but, realizing this was a self published author whom was just starting and how much potential I saw in this story, I gave it four stars.